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wranx
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0 posted 2002-08-30 11:55 PM



In the cards


Young women, it appeared
Were fascinated by my “cards”
And would plead for a read
Which I would give, gladly

You can look at these others
The Renaissance deck is pretty
But, I only read the "Thoth"
And it’s only for reading

So, cross my palm with silver
And I’ll give you a spread
And some nice Margaux
An overview, you see

Your love life?
A wreck, I’m afraid
And no, Dear
That doesn’t mean Death

Merely a change, a transition
With the Ace of Cups
And the Magician card
Make this very interesting

(Very)

More wine?

~wranx


In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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1 posted 2002-08-31 12:34 PM


Hmm, I liked this.  Thought I must say...I have a bit of trouble understanding all..
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-31 12:36 PM


The Ace of Cups and the Magician...one powerful kickstart to a new love affair, is it not?!?!
Enjoyed this poem.

Linda

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3 posted 2002-08-31 01:05 AM


Just keep me from "The Tower"--

in detriment or no?

I HATE THAT CARD.

HUGS.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-08-31 01:07 AM


OH...ten of swords? sucks pretty hard too.

damn...you didn't tell me you knew tarot.

wranx
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5 posted 2002-08-31 01:55 AM


Thanks for the read, Dragon Miss, and Earth Angel has probably explained away your troubles with it.

Indeed, Earth Angel, it does.

Hey witch, there is knowing it and KNOWING it. I dabbled in it, much as I dabble in everything. (run the "numbers" on Ed Rose, see what you get. Hmmm, never ran 'em on wranx)
Just did. Not so good, perhaps a new I.D is in order.

~wranx (for now)

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Zall
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6 posted 2002-08-31 11:53 AM


hmm never understood tarot myself, nice read though
brian sites
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7 posted 2002-09-02 10:37 AM


the smoov
pimpdaddy
mack
layin down
the cool track

devina
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8 posted 2002-09-02 07:02 PM


the cards have always been a seduce of mine. as you portray and lay YOU out..I find I like you more and more. grins**

more whiskey? (sorry from the hard edge) lol

enjoyed this Ed...been meaning to reply...but ~sighs~ to me...been rough lately...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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9 posted 2002-09-02 08:49 PM


oooh spooky I should read this now just been doing my own

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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10 posted 2002-09-03 12:05 PM


Wranx,
The queen of cups
sips her wine.
(which you offered to her)

Hm, if I knew anything about the tarot,
that could be the start of a poem...

Mike

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11 posted 2002-09-03 07:20 PM


*jaw drops to the floor* I'm in love!! lol sorry woah..I don't know how to express the chills this poem has sent down my spine..hrm..do my words do your poem justice!? I'm not scoring on orginality but hopefully I'm scoring on the sounding like a total fool..hrm..*shrugs*

Kristen

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12 posted 2002-09-04 02:18 AM


i've learned the hard way that there's only a "pq" diference between o and r...if h=r in first use. (lol) who knows what that means?
"thoth" = "truth" where "pq" = "pretty quick"

so, exactly when were you knighted, wranx? i am very apologetic over the fact that i missed it. i was goona be the one screaming "beaver right"s to you! (dam?) this was a phenom i'd pay for as lessons in word perfection.


i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

[This message has been edited by EveGnosis (09-04-2002 02:23 AM).]

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