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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She's a ghost. She writes in raindrops and tears. She writes to the sun before it dries her away. She's a ghost, and I write back. She will not seal the waxy seams. She's a ghost, her words float like incense burned too long -- the smallest scorch. The slightest thing went wrong. She's a ghost, a reflection in a clock, so I spend hours staring at her hands. I can't look into her mouth, the bay or the breeze. Her face is ribbons and snow and sand. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-30-2002 01:38 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a ghost? maybe, but you've captured her on the lens, paranormal one sadshade brian |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, brian. I was simply looking at some poetry of a PIPfriend today, and wondered why she had to leave (though ... I do know why) Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ This is quite hauntingly lovely~ How thoughtful that you would *gift* it in the absence of a departed PiP poetess~ Hope she gets to see it~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Marge. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Aww, this is almost sweet. -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks, Tanya.Almost Mike |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sounds a little sad as well but I enjoyed  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
*long hug* Baby, I wish things could be different. Wish life wouldn't give us issues to talk to psychiatrists about or occurences to write sad poems about. your tongue's like poison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I usually read your poems twice. The first time is to try and understand them, the second time is for pure enjoyment. Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, all.Mike |
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