Dark Poetry #3 |
Your Storm |
Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Your Storm Your gray clouds Have covered my sunny days. I feel nothing now But your suffering. The lightening Of your anger Strikes me so. I feel your confusion. The cold winds Of your fear Sting my back. If feel your worry. The bitter rain drops Of your stress Hate my face. I feel your frustration. The growling thunder Of your sadness Startle my soul. I feel your hurt. I see it growing Your gray clouds Turn to black. I feel your storm. -Tanya ( I really didnt like this one too much...I really wasnt going to post it, but something changed my mind *shrugs*) ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Trust your instincts, Good work DM Aaron |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes Just Post It this is an honest write so it has to be here startling lines in this sometimes emotions can be forces of nature and must be weathered remember post them please brian |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Tanya, This reminds me of a poem I wrote called Love among the storm. /pip/Forum70/HTML/002391.html Mike [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-30-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Thank ya! Oh and Mike, I read that poem. Awesome as all of your others are! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This was better than fine. Sometimes you can read your own work and become inured to it. I agree, just post it! ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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