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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-08-29 02:32 PM

I squeeze wine from stones
to make broth for briney soup.
The color of your hair
sticks like steam to edge my mouth.
And when I speak, I smell
your breath in mine. Am I gone?
The sky is alcohol and fire.
Sip its taste, now. Deep. Swell smooth.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-29-2002 02:33 PM).]

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

1 posted 2002-08-29 02:34 PM

I still can't see "color" without thinking it's spelled wrong.

I love you. Now quit guilting me about my hair; I'll be back to red in a month or so.

Awesome poem, wie immer.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-29 02:36 PM

Glad yo enjouyed the doulouros coulours of this pouem.

I love you.

Mike

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

3 posted 2002-08-29 02:38 PM

Go ahead and mock allll you want. I can just drop all my other British influences out of all aspects of my life, to go with my u's in colour and favourite and the like.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-08-29 02:40 PM

No no! I'll be good.

...................me

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

5 posted 2002-08-29 02:57 PM

wonderful work yet again Mike! I still very much enjoy reading your words!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-29 03:05 PM

Thanks, Tanya. And one thing has come out of these replies so far, with a clarity unsurpassed ... Lori owns me! Cool.

Mike

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

7 posted 2002-08-29 04:44 PM

Aw... It's nice that you can admit that.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-08-29 05:30 PM

Admit it?
Baby,
I *LIVE* it!

(quite gladly)
Mike

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-29-2002 05:42 PM).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2002-08-29 07:36 PM

Mike dont be mean its colour

Excellent work tho

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-08-29 07:41 PM

Heh heh. All right, Maria.

Mike

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

11 posted 2002-08-30 09:59 AM

Short with good impact,
Nice work again,

To all: I dont mind the patois you guys speak colour into color is fair enough. At least you say it the same. Its the fact you cant see the T in waTer that boggles me.

Alwight guvnor!
Bloody good show old boy!

Zall

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

12 posted 2002-08-30 12:15 PM

yo seem to be otnmbered
cont me in
on yor side
this grop don't nderstand
that letter scks

wine is sblime
brun

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

13 posted 2002-08-30 12:21 PM

Zall, you've heard someone say wa-er? I know I say "winner" and not "winter" (and "ar-inj" not "or-ange"), but I have never heard someone say wa-er.

I guess I haven't lived.

And Brian, that's two versus everyone.

Mike

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