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All Of Me |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. 
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All Of Me My eyes They burn My body Its sore My heart It aches My life Its ruined My dreams Are tarnished My love Is torn My mind Is confused My emotions Are suffering My senses Are rearranged All of me In pain Because of you... -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this very much and it made me almost sad.   ~*Azi*~ [This message has been edited by Match (08-29-2002 01:47 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's love poetry after. Mike |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep, It's the same for everyone. But not all can write of it. You've done this, well. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Very nicely written. It hit close to home in many ways. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
been here. often. love yourself for this purge sweetie. enjoyed. ~the other Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Know the feeling which you conveyed so well. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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