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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
0 posted 2002-08-29 01:50 AM


I see the pain, you saw it,
But i don't feel it.

I can't feel a thing now
After what happened.

Don't ask me if
I'm alright.

Just say "hello"
And move on.

I don't want you
To see me like this.

I don't want
To see you like that.

Please.
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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-29 01:57 AM

Wow...kinda makes you wonder what really happend.  Great write.
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
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2 posted 2002-08-29 12:30 PM

moshpit,
Ouch. That felt really intimate and personal.

Mike
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