Dark Poetry #3 |
Down Again |
MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
I'm feeling week again today i no longer want to stay i hear you talking to me again telling me those things i shouldnt have to hear your vioce getting so loud shutting out any other sound just let me be just leave me alone i cant block you out anymore im starting to feel like im gonna lose and i know you wont let me chose so many things i want to say to you tell you your wrong i dont want to be like this forever im falling apart, trying so hard to stay together i think one day im gonna fall lose this battle one day you'll take me away but please dont take me today tomorrow is calling my name i want to see what tomorrow has to bring see the sun shine just one more time for this i would comit any crime i hear you calling me i guess tomorrow i'll never see -:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world Have you forgot about me?-:¦:- [This message has been edited by MissunderstoodGrrl (08-26-2002 06:44 PM).] |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow...Good work! I really like your work! ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Yes, very good work! I can relate. We always want to believe that tomorrow will be better... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
MissUnderstoodGrrl, Keep that hope under your tongue, like a rock to taste when you need it. 'cause you (as all of us do) are gonna need it. Mike |
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