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MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-26 06:43 PM


I'm feeling week again today
i no longer want to stay
i hear you talking to me again
telling me those things i shouldnt have to hear
your vioce getting so loud
shutting out any other sound
just let me be
just leave me alone
i cant block you out anymore
im starting to feel like im gonna lose
and i know you wont let me chose
so many things i want to say to you
tell you your wrong
i dont want to be like this forever
im falling apart, trying so hard to stay together
i think one day im gonna fall
lose this battle
one day you'll take me away
but please dont take me today
tomorrow is calling my name
i want to see what tomorrow has to bring
see the sun shine just one more time
for this i would comit any crime
i hear you calling me
i guess tomorrow i'll never see


-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

[This message has been edited by MissunderstoodGrrl (08-26-2002 06:44 PM).]

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Dragon Mistress
Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-26 06:52 PM


Wow...Good work!  I really like your work!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
2 posted 2002-08-28 07:04 PM


Yes, very good work!
I can relate.
We always want to believe that tomorrow will be better...

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-29 12:36 PM


MissUnderstoodGrrl,

Keep that hope under your tongue, like a rock to taste when you need it.

'cause you (as all of us do) are gonna need it.

Mike

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