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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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why is it that I feel so alone, when I am surrounded by those who care tired of being who I am linked to a past going nowhere forgive me these moods today's not the best forever seems never along with the rest of my thoughts that steal moments once happy with you an end soon to come I am swimming in blue "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-26-2002 11:10 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminds me so much of me, it makes me wanna slap yer grandmaw (sorry--  --kind of a cajun joke thing)but yes, you have all the symptoms of a serious disease---smiling, Oprah calls it-- the disease to please... BURN THE WALLS DOWN BABY... excellent write--a portrature.  |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
This was great to read! I enjoyed it immensly! I really do look forward to reading more!! Swimming in blue...I like that!!! ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You know Karen, I believe you are right..I am going to just please myself from now on...thanks *s thank you DM..I mostly post in open...but really wasn't in the mood to this time. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-27-2002 01:22 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice to see you poking your head into this coal-blackened place every now and again. Great poem, Maureen. Hope you're swimming more to the sun, now. Mike |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
to tell you the truth..I really can't swim that is why I married a lifeguard..  and that is probably why I feel as if I am drowning now... M |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
God...that sounds so much like me right now...ugh! Trying to please everyone while at the same time wanting to tell everybody to just die and leave me alone! AHH!! Very nicely done. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Nice work...enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
D and DD *s thank you both for your kind responses...sometimes one loses control of their life and has to take it back..I am trying... M |
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