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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-08-26 11:09 PM


why is it
that I feel so alone,
when I am surrounded
by those who care
tired of being
who I am
linked to a past
going nowhere

forgive me
these moods
today's not the best
forever seems never
along with the rest
of my thoughts
that steal moments
once happy with you
an end soon to come
I am swimming in blue




"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-26-2002 11:10 PM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-08-27 12:34 PM


This reminds me so much of me, it makes me wanna slap yer grandmaw (sorry-- --kind of a cajun joke thing)

but yes, you have all the symptoms of a serious disease---smiling, Oprah calls it--
the disease to please...

BURN THE WALLS DOWN BABY...

excellent write--a portrature.

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
2 posted 2002-08-27 02:40 AM


This was great to read!  I enjoyed it immensly!  I really do look forward to reading more!!  Swimming in blue...I like that!!!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-08-27 11:08 AM


You know Karen, I believe you are right..I am going to just please myself  from now on...thanks *s
thank you DM..I mostly post in open...but really wasn't in the mood to  this time.
M

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bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-08-27 12:10 PM


Nice to see you poking your head into this coal-blackened place every now and again.

Great poem, Maureen. Hope you're swimming more to the sun, now.

Mike

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-08-27 03:18 PM


to tell you the truth..I really can't swim that is why I married a lifeguard..


and that is probably why I feel as if I am drowning now...

M

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
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Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
6 posted 2002-08-27 11:55 PM


God...that sounds so much like me right now...ugh! Trying to please everyone while at the same time wanting to tell everybody to just die and leave me alone! AHH!! Very nicely done.
WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
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7 posted 2002-08-28 09:19 AM


Nice work...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-08-28 10:45 AM


D and DD *s  thank you both for your kind responses...sometimes one loses control of their life and has to take it back..I am trying...

M

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