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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
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0 posted 2002-08-26 04:49 AM


Shinning Steel

My tears;
Shards of ice.
Bitter cold
Mingles with,
The warmth
Of my blood.

Ever flowing
Icy-warm rivers
Over milky skin.
Wandering streams;
Staining all with
Unforgiving fingers

Shinning steel;
Grinning off moonlight.
Blanketed with
Grieving blood and
Mocking tears.
Creator of scars.

© Copyright 2002 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-08-26 09:08 AM


Welcome to the Dark, lots of concise vivid images to partake of here. I do look forward to seeing more!
Zall
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since 2002-08-25
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2 posted 2002-08-26 09:45 AM


Its got heart, I like it
bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-08-26 02:57 PM


I like this, but please tell me it's not about cutting.
leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
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4 posted 2002-09-04 01:14 PM


opposites attract. great mix of them in this piece. enjoyed!
Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2002-09-04 01:53 PM


hrm...interesting..alot of vivid images come to mind hopefully its only my imagination flirting with my senses and is not reality...

Kristen

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