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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
I'll take the lead And invent new ideas But [edited] firm rules I don't obey So neither will they We'll risk having to learn Crushing lessons in maturity Soft buttered heart Hides deep-seeded fears Am I disliked? Am I unloved? Forget it, I will be brave Just don't let my dreams Run down my face In tragic tears! If so, my heart will melt And my soul will be bruised. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-25-2002 08:04 AM).] |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
you go, n_f_n!!! totally inspiring and f'ing amazing! envy drowns me now! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Newsy, I like the "conflicted" thoughts in this. Soft as iron. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
News, Wranx said it best, here. Mike |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Yup yup, good work! (Do you really need to hear that for the millionth time??)  I enjoy reading your work very much!-Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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