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My Sight Through Red Eyes
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My Sight Through Red Eyes |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
My cup runneth over with sunshine From that intoxicating brew Now the birds sing And all the flowers are blooming. Do I know what I see? Sure. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
or do I? (gotta smile...) |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
quote "or do I? (gotta smile...)" gotta stay for just for a little while. Sure, demand the overture. Why would i dare to spy? when the sky bleeds blue and spills into our day. My paper cup fills with the deluge. I'll wait... ------------------- News_From_Nowhere you know I can't hold myself back when I get inspired like that... goodjob |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and so demands a raconteur as I wipe the sweat from brow... an orchestrated overture the silence sings before..allow the angst to ring in ecstacy-- the note that rings too loud... and shivers up then down the spine... oh I wish it would..again...  "News_From_Nowhere you know I can't hold myself back when I get inspired like that... goodjob" [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-24-2002 07:21 AM).] |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Oh you've just got to, love the serenity... Blazing through distant black holed sons. The blades of the grass, scattered sparse. The ants remind me of my authority. We can have some more, Summer is in full bloom. That viola is still tuning. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and oh, let's praise the thing undone all hail the wise chameleon! in the light it turns to white and in the shadow becomes one with the darkness in disguise chameleon in dusk of sigh... (much fun, btw!  )[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-24-2002 08:43 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I see that your cup of intoxicating brew has spilled into serenity and chameleon, (I can picture them, mouths agape, like baby birds) Where can I get a "40" of it? ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*ahem* wranx? I believe I have used the visual of an open mouthed baby bird--IN ADULT!!! and hey, it's an inspiring poem, ain't it? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to add, that I liked this much. Not sure if my answer was misconstrued or not, but was concerned that perhaps the author thought I answered only in jest. no. I liked the open-ended-ness (izzatawoid?) of this...anyhow...I did enjoy...and I thank also the chameleon for the fun... |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Lovely....a short and sweet poem with nice flow |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Again, you humor me and entice me with your way of writing, News...This one was like Kerouac or Bukowski phasing into Robert Frost, and then saying ta 'ell with it, 'cause you're just you. (Do I know...sure) Too cool. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
gawd, i've got a bar up here just waiting for you. we'll drink 'til ireland is in our backyard, and all the while, you can get up and read this one over and over and over again. (eve claps now) i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
News, Nice, nasty (if you want it to be) poem. I like that it gave off other lives too, as other poems. Mike |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Good poem! I like much! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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