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Dee
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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-23 09:36 PM


My friends tell me that I'm wrong
to love you the way I do.
You belong to someone else
so I have no right to you.

It took one sweet kiss to know
you're all I'll ever desire.
And just one night together
to set your heart on fire.

Won't you tell her its over?
What she wants can no longer be.
The love you once shared is gone
now your life is here with me.

August 2002

© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
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CU, NY
1 posted 2002-08-24 03:48 AM


If but only strength truly reigned
You'd not have to ask this poem's question
But since you did, Dee,
I hope the answer is given
(The right answer)
I'm so here with this one

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

Dee
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2 posted 2002-08-24 06:12 AM


News, I hope so too, and soon. Ty for your coments
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
3 posted 2002-08-25 12:42 PM


I've been on the orating end of this one for three years, and now my answer has been given to me. Funny how the "Grand Storyteller" works sometimes, as I thought if the three year situation wasn't to be, that neither was I to be after 33 years of trying, but the answer...ahh...my "light of an angel" without even having to try.
You will have all the love that you are so deserved to have, Dee. You just gotta believe, want, and will it into existence. (And apparantly prayer helps?!?)

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
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4 posted 2002-08-25 02:55 AM


your friends love you, and are always only looking out for ways to prevent you from getting hurt. but ultimately, they only want that which is going to make you happy.
if the hurt is worth the possibility, then you keep going for it, but remember that you are at a disadvantage when it comes to knowing your own self-worth unless you truly take the time to put yourself in "time out" and have to quietly see the whole situation. good luck, and i wish you happiness be it with this or something you have yet to experience!

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-08-29 12:50 PM


Dee,
Here's hopin'
the best works out
for everyone --
whatever that best
may be.

Mike

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
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6 posted 2002-08-29 03:15 PM


Nice poem! I enjoyed much!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
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between the gutter & the stars
7 posted 2002-08-31 04:50 AM


someone said to me once that you should never let anyone convince you that you don't deserve something you want.

i enjoyed the story you've told here. perhaps we'll get a conclusion.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Dee
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8 posted 2002-08-31 09:17 PM


Thank you all for your thoughts on this. I guess I was just thinking aloud. I will take on what you have said and keep looking for the right answers.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
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Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
9 posted 2002-08-31 09:53 PM


The only thing wrong with love is denying yourself the one you really care for, regardless of what your friends and family say. If they deny your love for another person, than they are not you true friends. This is one of the biggest lessons I've learned about friends so far.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2002-09-02 12:16 PM


In your heart you have the answers! Listen to it very carefully.

I can feel your frustration and pain.

Take care
Linda

Dee
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Queensland, Australia
11 posted 2002-09-02 01:47 AM


Thank you both for your insight.
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
12 posted 2002-09-02 07:56 AM


did you post this recently, i remember the words, my imagination?

still, good work

Zall

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