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jmncww
New Member

since 2002-08-22

Posts 2
georgia, usa

0 posted 2002-08-22 12:27 PM

Why was I created?
Why was I born?
There must be a reason
My life seems torn

Jagged thoughts, Mystic dreams
Something's fighting for my soul
Depression, pain, rage, hate
My hands are slipping on their hold

My dreams are dispersing
My world relenting
Giving way to a greater power
Something's fighting for my soul
I feel it every second of every hour

Startling colors, Blinding light
Giving way to twisted fate
In this poor and sheltered life
I've gotta get out before it's too late

Needles envy, Jealous rage
Demons tearing at my soul
My life is ending at this stage
The endless fight has taken toll

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-08-22 10:12 PM

jmncww, Nice first post. Welcome to PiP and the "Dark" Forum. There are many here that will want to see more.

Oh!, Hope that this was in the metaphor.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-08-24 02:56 AM

heavy questions
and a heartwrite
keep posting
brian

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

3 posted 2002-08-24 03:05 AM

I can identify with your writing. However, you did it so well in your expression. Made me feel connected to the writing. Job well done from one writer to another. That is what I love about other writers that are gifted, they bring out words I sometimes do not have!!! You did that!

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

4 posted 2002-08-24 03:19 AM

Be not afraid
of what you not yet see
for your heart's eye can be
as keen as this...

I know, I should have said
"grand poetry" to end it,
but ta hades with firm rules, right?

Great piece!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-29 12:56 PM

jmncww
Grrr!, and
sigh of relief.

(tensing)

Mike

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

6 posted 2002-08-29 03:01 PM

Wow. This was good! I liked it much!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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