Diastonene II -- The Lord Checks the Doors

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

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0 posted 2002-08-20 12:04 PM

2. The Lord Checks the Doors

Lord Diastonene
checks the locks
on the lowest floor.

Near one staircase,
he stops and shivers,
leading to a white door.

He won't move on.
Something beyond
the threshold of his dream.

Behind that white
and empty plane --
something he can't see.

He can hear it.
Like wet separation.
Air calculation.

Knobs like gems.
Pilfered pockets.
Seams blocked by stones.

Soft violent twists.
Turning the light.
Shadow-secret bones.

And the shadow says.
Well, you know what she says.
Where is my Lady now?

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

1 posted 2002-08-20 01:53 PM

Yr work is so shivery-cool.

*kiss*

I love you and yr poetry and you s'more. Now let's both quit being mood.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2002-08-20 05:02 PM

Kwel r there any more? I'd like to see more.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

E
New Member

since 2002-08-19

Posts 7
between the rouge

3 posted 2002-08-20 07:53 PM

Interesting.. kind of chilling.. bringing on the bacon..

Ariel was always my favorite babe.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-08-21 01:29 AM

uhuh! uhuh!
yeah? yeah?
and?
come on!

(creepy this
"He can hear it
like wet separation
air calculation"
jeezus)
first one light, airy
this one bonewhiteshadowfright
waitingbrian

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

[This message has been edited by brian sites (08-21-2002 01:31 AM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-08-21 11:54 AM

And now we wait,
for the turn and creak,
of portal seek...Eek!

Right behind you guys.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-21 11:58 AM

Posting three momentarily.

As patterns seem to form
I feel it cold and warm.
-Joy Division

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

7 posted 2002-08-21 01:20 PM

This is soooo good!!!

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-08-22 11:55 AM

Thanks!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-08-28 04:15 PM

From 1. The Lady Watches Bees /pip/Forum46/HTML/002429.html

To 3. The Lady Wanders the Halls /pip/Forum46/HTML/002441.html

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-28-2002 04:18 PM).]

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2003-07-18 11:18 PM

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