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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I'm hoping that there's more than this I can't keep going on like this I need to be more than this because I am nothing. Why can't I get past this one part in my life...? It's destroying me. It's become me. I hide inside shadows of my own walls ... but why? I don't know what I'm hiding from anymore ... Do you think it's left.. whatever it is? Was I hiding from anything at all? I want to come out... I need to break through. But I'm bound to walls... this phase is eating me, it's keeping me, I'm belonging to it. Why can't I breathe!? Why can't I believe in anything anymore??? Am I that worthless!? Am I that meek!? I'm suffocating... there's plenty of air... but my lungs are closed. I don't want to live. I don't want to breathe... Die! Suffocate! It eats at my pain... but in return, I sink deeper into it. It's ruining me... I'm ugly inside. I'm ugly inside.. I'm ruining me... The only thing keeping me from this world is myself. The only one staying in the shadows is me... but why don't I believe... why can't I believe? There's not thing out there beyond this point. Your God is inexistent! I will never convert! Your God cannot save me... I can only save myself. |
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nichola_louise Junior Member
since 2002-08-17
Posts 24Adelaide, Australia |
The feelings your expressed in thie poem gave me real insight into your personality.......but maybe look at the way you have structured your poem........i think it could be better structured.... Other than that the poem is great.......truely insightful |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Glad to see the vent and confusion on paper than by any other means... learn to *LOVE* yourself girlie...you deserve that!!! take care you!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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