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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
SILENCE! Hear what I say, enemies like spray. SILENCE! No inner sense! I am Death, Out of breath. SILENCE! FIBER OPTICS! ERROR HERE! Another smear. Streak your transparency further. Spear-in and out- quasi Sentiment. Paint templatic faces, clone the copies, Black market nursery... [This message has been edited by Chameleon (08-16-2002 05:52 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have an interesting perspective here--tho I confess this is sort of cryptic for me--but I too, like to write that way--somtimes I just like the space for interpretation--and I do see that you encourage critique--and? since I'm not exactly sure what you are trying to say, I can't very well offer an opinion on improving that--smiling here, but feel free to enlighten ME! Welcome! (and I gently add that you may find a typo in "black-market nusery...") and feel free to return the favor for me anytime!  |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
thankyou serenity. Well, that typo? Thats the error its meant to be 'black market nursery' [This message has been edited by Chameleon (08-16-2002 05:53 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um...I will "mea culpa" all over m'self, if I can find a definition for nusery....sigh...and? it's been a long night, and? damned if I didn't have miles to go before I sleep! (s'what else is new...grin) nice to meetcha! |
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