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guillotine guarantee |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
smile your big black ouija board smile while the horal cuckoo of the clock smiles its guarantee. your voice ensnares my entire body & puckers time into small folds and wrinkles that dispassionately tease me. i watch a cockroach crawl up the foreleg of a stagnant sea and see your years play out in only minutes in whole shoals of lunacy. i think back to the day i first felt your infatuate spark in my heart. you were a damnable destination, you were a guillotine guarantee. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this a helluva lot.  the language at first struck me as rather dramatic, until I thought of all of the "guillotine guarantees" that I have found irresistable in the past! (now, I find it understated!  )Nice work here...enjoyed! |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
thanks a helluva lot :} glad you liked it! don't undress my love |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A vivid and compelling look at another "road to nowhere" ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
interesting If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A broken heart is always dramatic. Rocked. |
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