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Dark Poetry #3

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Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

0 posted 2002-08-11 07:30 PM

There is poison in my soup
in my veins
behind my eyes
and it strangles me -
throat bound and squealing.
It bleeds me heavy
onto the floor of a bookshop,
fast burns the customers
with it’s venom
and each of my fingers swell
gasp naked at the tile
for an end.

desolation angel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-11

Posts 20
east coast

1 posted 2002-08-11 07:38 PM

each of my fingers swell
gasp naked at the tile
for an end.

wow. i loved that.

So runs my dream, but what am I?
An infant crying in the night;
An infant crying for the light;
And with no language but a cry.

Tennyson
"In Me

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-11 10:09 PM

You can count me in. Loved it too

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

3 posted 2002-08-11 11:06 PM

you know - one of these days, A, you're going to write something that i understand... that way i can, well, understand why i like your writing so much. have no clue whether close to your intent or not, but there is emoted pain in this heading right at me from your written word. i suppose i could grab several things out of it, but pain, written, leaps out at me. all in all, it's not only fun to try and decipher your hieroglyphics, but fun to see how you put them together.

peace n' hugs,

C

PS - who's the hot chick you got to take a picture for ya?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-08-18 10:55 PM

the mind is a wonderful thing to play with isn't it??

you know that I'm getting there. . . hearing you along with everyone else. . . finding the words. . .

excellent. . . peace you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-19 12:06 PM

The boiling point, isn't it?

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