Dark Poetry #3 |
Shadow Dancing |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I went dancing last night in a big dance hall just me and the shadow that follows behind. I had the lights real bright so my shadow had life and it always kept in step with a tendency to lead. I pictured you there in the shadow as we danced your dark shape next to mine holding me, loving me again. Doing a waltz in the glare of the lights so bright. When I'd had my fill of dancing I walked to the door you followed me so closely. I reached over to the switch and with just a flick you were gone. WhiteRose In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
I reached over to the switch and with just a flick you were gone. so quick. :} good piece. don't undress my love |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
kwel i lvoe the shadows If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
WhiteRose: A much enjoyed piece. I love the adaption of shadows and lost loves, of dancing, and bright lights. It's very original, and superbly done. Smashing ending, as well. I honestly can't see anything in it I would change. Great meter, length - pukka piece. A pleasure to read. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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