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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-12 01:19 PM



Oh wretched spirit
thy hand is cold
venomous demon
thy words are bold.
Ye speak of truth
yet lies unfold.
Oh wretched spirit
from days of old
with silver tongue
and horns of gold.
I cast thee down
to the pit of hell
hark the devils
wedding bells
as thou art joined
with thy mate
the father of lies
spreader of hate.
Oh wretched spirit
it's too late
thy soul is his
it is thy fate.

WhiteRose

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-08-12 06:29 PM


Compelling images and the language is superb.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-08-12 07:25 PM


In agreement with Kethry, this is most compelling.

I admire the ability to tackle the wide range of topic that you have.
Keep it up

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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3 posted 2002-08-14 11:25 AM


Wow good wordplay

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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