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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-08-08 12:50 PM



You push me away from you,
I let you.
You push me away from me….
How dare you?

I’m moving up,
I’m moving on…
You could be here.
I’m growing up,
I’m growing on…
But you’re not here.

You could have been here with me,
You could have been here...
You could have spared one moment
In your perfect life.
Just to be here with me.

You push me away from you,
And I let you.
You push me away from me….
How dare you?

I’m leaving town,
I’m leaving you.
You can’t attend.
I’m growing up,
I’m growing over
Missing you.


"...What's that word you said??
Um.. cool?  What's that?" -dren

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (08-08-2002 12:51 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-08-08 05:59 PM


Both an "ouch" and a "I'm glad for you" on this one. That might be Dark's formula, actually. Heh heh.

Mike


PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-08-08 06:11 PM


You just may be right...

Thanks...
sara

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3 posted 2002-08-11 08:02 PM


I like the spirt in this one.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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