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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-08-07 11:12 PM

This is me…

Tantamount in press
of obligation-
I seethe in oblivion
of restrictions
I’d rather not own.

Be like us.

Instead
I tremble dance
with painted hues
grasping
for a taste of new.

Gentle storm suckles
at my sanity
As moon drops
hide midst my grin.

I prefer
to flavor my own
destiny
in shades
of shock.
Never~
Begging pardon to
your wisps of platitude.

Be serious
like you?
Nah.
You can find me
amidst the frolic
of scorching good times.

Sorry-not
This
is
me…
take it?
or leave.

*This one is my venting episode ( a rather "nice" one I might add) of meeting up with an old childhood friend...

and I suppose you can figure the rest out on your own!!! grins...shameless, I know...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-08-08 09:41 AM

Gee! I would never guess to find you, midst the the swirl of dance or unbound baudy.
lol.
~wranx

ps. Bound baudy, maybe.

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

2 posted 2002-08-08 03:40 PM

Another beauty.... devina.

Enjoyed much!

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-08 04:19 PM

I LIKE yr anger.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-08-08 05:35 PM

I think it's great that you can fit 'Nah.'
into a poem... it usually don't fit well.
But this is great.
_sara

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

5 posted 2002-08-11 08:54 PM

One thing you should remember sis...is that he had a very different background growing up and all (long story I know)...but you know how much we all LOVE the YOU that is you...

miss you!!!

and I think I'M starting to sound like the older sister...pishaw!!!

A heart can only truly break, once it learns to love completley.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2002-08-11 09:00 PM

Ah wranx...you've found me out huh??? bound more than the baudy..but you know...thanks sweetie!!!

Dea- thanks for that hun...miss your words these days...gotta sneak on more often..

Mike- and how did I know? hmm...mr. DARK...lol...you've heard me vent for quite some years, so go on and tell the good people that
this one was really NICE???!!

Sara- glad you caught that...thought twice about it..then? just muffled it up a bit...because after all-- this is MY poem, right? never doubt that hand that flies to paper before your proper grammer kicks in...LOL

and Ambs? what is this wisdom you've found? must be that mountain air!! lol Miss you too sis...but the thing with him? You know I have NEVER considered it an accident when someone lodges their head up their bum and forgets about it...*devious* yes... love you!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

[This message has been edited by devina (08-11-2002 09:01 PM).]

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