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Peaceful Dissipation |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I slide through the cracks like clear liquid of un-cried tears. slow puddle me yearning for the dark- below cement fortress solitary. silence. Slipping graceful to safety- by naked eyes blush of hesitation- I pool within my own yearn and shed the drops of time… drops of me. drops of mine. Rock-still waiting lather-licking wounds- I grip my shakes, and dissolve upon Earth’s bedroom floor. peaceful dissipation of a drop I shed too soon… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but, what soaks it up??? just me, walking in the Darkness for a while hon. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful. I love how much you're posting here. Lying on that earthen floor Said if I only could ... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful... DeaDiAmore |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
the stanzas read like slow tears... pooling and dripping... you know what you have? s-t-y-l-e...  at least your dissapation into the dark is peaceful. enjoyed, and it induced pondering in myself (as ya usually do). it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (08-06-2002 12:47 AM).] |
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