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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-08-01 02:04 AM


Afraid of the dark?
Yeah, me too
Wanna entertain our fears?
We could talk of politics
Or the defacation of once earthly beauty
Or love
Nightmares to visit
Just for kicks and grins, of course
Laughter to scream for
And in the end
We faced the beast
Showing its only remnant
As gristle stuck between our smiles
Let's gawk our way into madness
Before another tax is raised
Another tree replaced by nuclear reactor
Another heart annihilated
Wanna tame our inner fears?
Yeah, me too

© Copyright 2002 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
1 posted 2002-08-01 02:30 AM


ohhhh yeahhh
thank you purity for this
this kind of thing has been bugging me for
a while now
your way with words
made me smile
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-08-01 11:41 AM


Always love yr rage, Chris.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
Posts 486

3 posted 2002-08-01 12:29 PM


Great work Purity...I enjoyed this.

DeaDiAmore

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
4 posted 2002-08-14 01:15 AM


"Showing its only remnant as gristle stuck between our smiles"

I LOVE THIS LINE! You have a unique wierdness, but I like it.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

Moon Dust
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5 posted 2002-08-14 10:55 AM


very different, but then again thats a good thing

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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