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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
I am a ghost, Moving freely, No one can see me The hate for you is all so clearly. I hear you scream, When in your presence, You hear me whisper, I died because of you. The shouts of pain, The screams of anger, The payback I try and give, But it doesn't seem to matter. Im free now, No one can harm me, I can roam the earth, Haunting as I please. Boys and girls, Im not no casper, Im out to free this mind, And kill the demon that my soul was after. ___________________________________________________ Ladies and Gents, Im farely new to this place but dont throw me down as a disgrace. Give me some feedback, I hope you do, give me opinion and tell me wut you dont and do like Thank You ! -iMMuNe- |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 I enjoyed this, Immune. It's nice to bring some gentleness to Dark now and again. Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Isnt it?  |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Very well written....hmm there's a ghost here...is it you? ;-) (lol) -susan- |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Told ya. Lovin it. -Sara- |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Yes I believe there is moments, I watchin over you so be good darnit Well anyways this is the most replies I have gotten so far.. GIMME A COOKIE !! :-D -iMMuNe- |
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