Dark Poetry #3 |
Tortured |
akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
Tortured Scared and alone Lost and miserable Tortured and persecuted Can you identify with me? Can you understand me? Can you help me? Hurt and abandoned Abused and torn Desolate and misserable No one to help me No one to reach me No one to understand me Akira |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
nicely done, akira jade A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well said Akira, But it's the hurt, fear and loneliness, all of us feel, that tempers us. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
its very true, "Tortured" explains how people feel and the reality of life Akira |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I enjoyed how small -- and large -- this poem is. Said if I only could ... |
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