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Alan
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0 posted 2002-07-27 07:36 PM


Whiskey river flowing strong and free
Carry me away upon the currents of thee
Let me feel no pain as my life
Flows from me into the dark abyss

Set my mind free of this pain
That torments me
Let me feel the love of she
Just one more time before you take me

Oh, whiskey river flowing strong and free
Take this pain away from me
As of this moment I surrender myself to you
So take my life, my soul as only you can do

© alan

July 26,2002


© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
1 posted 2002-07-28 12:18 PM


been there before, alan
succinctly nice
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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