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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-07-27 08:39 AM


A great hall of tainted echos,
Commanded great sounds from a step,
In this tone a steady dripping,
Reminds me of days long ago,

Now an empty echo fades out,
A memory, a slient memory,
walking though a slient hall,
Can only be a dead mans walk,

I tasted slience,
When I was dead.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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1 posted 2002-07-28 05:11 AM


Makes me want to listen to Joy Division, which is always a good thing!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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2 posted 2002-07-28 01:40 PM


visually silent dark...

enjoyed this!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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