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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
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0 posted 2002-07-24 01:29 PM


This is really stupid... and I guess non-creative.
But I thought I'd try to post it anyway.


To break
is to be a wave that wont.
To hurt
is to be a cut that wont.
to bleed
is the be an open vein that wont.

To see,
is to not be able.
TO see, is to look from a different angle.
So I say...
Very few of us do see.

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

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MomentzBefore
Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31

1 posted 2002-07-24 04:59 PM


Don't think what sometimes you write is stupid. Everybody has different thoughts and ideas that makes us be apart from each other. Honestly I liked the poem....keep it up.

-susan-

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