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die of boredom (he he he sara)
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die of boredom (he he he sara) |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
i could die of the dust of the boredom of the everyday things nothing is ever new doesn't blood have to move to stay blue? or maybe i'm different maybe my blood will forever be red but no that couldn't be for that would be new and god forbid there would ever be anything new anything different around here that would last more than a second before dissapearing into the world to go to better places to do better things yet i am stuck here and someday i will bleed my red blood and i will die but things will stay the same in this place that's in denial covered in dust and afraid of change life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Oh my God... Don't read mine. Gosh, yours turned out so much better. Now, I feel so stupid for writing it... See, my poems always twist into something associating with this one guy, I'm totally in love with ... and it got all messed up ... and I'd feel bad destroying the poem, because it's like a baby... (how many stupid excuses can I come up with) Well, I liked it, and it seems that you've won this challenge ... maybe we'll try this again some time ... it's been fun. Write on! Your poetry buddy, Sara "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
""doesn't blood have to move to stay blue? or maybe i'm different maybe my blood will forever be red.................. ""yet i am stuck here and someday i will bleed my red blood and i will die but things will stay the same in this place that's in denial covered in dust and afraid of change"" that's what I'm talking about... those parts. "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" -Otep [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-24-2002 12:28 AM).] |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
if you read all the other poetry i never submitted here sara, you will see that i talk about dust A LOT too. dust is just so interesting i mean i've always wondered what it's made up of and why it's everywhere and how god created it and oh great i'm rambling again... life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
This piece reminded me of a line from Fydor Dostoevsky's NOTES FROM UNDERGROUND: "Golden pins are stuck into people's breasts out of boredom. But what's worse? The pins will be welcomed then." Good piece. It brings up an all too familiar rememberance of the boredom this life can have. I love your signature by the way. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hey Abby, I downloaded that "She Hates Me" song, and it's soo good!!! I didn't know your e-mail... so i thought i'd reply to your poem again! Lol Great poem.. heehee. Well, talk to you later. Your Writing budd, Sara "With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain" |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
i told you it was good! i think we keep missing each other on aim cuz i was on earlier then you were on and i wasn't now i'm on and your not...lol oh and bye the way, thanks secrets..i made up the signature my self ::grins:: i like yours too! i have never heard the poem you talked about but it sounds cool. yeah this life can be pretty boring lol  life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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