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shadowchild458
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0 posted 2002-07-24 12:16 PM


i could die of the dust
of the boredom
of the everyday things
nothing is ever new
doesn't blood
have to move
to stay blue?
or maybe i'm different
maybe my blood
will forever be red
but no
that couldn't be
for that would be new
and god forbid
there would ever be
anything new
anything different
around here
that would last
more than a second
before dissapearing
into the world
to go to better places
to do better things
yet i am stuck here
and someday
i will bleed my red blood
and i will die
but things will stay the same
in this place
that's in denial
covered in dust
and afraid of change

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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1 posted 2002-07-24 12:22 PM


Oh my God...
Don't read mine.
Gosh, yours turned out so much better.
Now, I feel so stupid for writing it...
See, my poems always twist into something associating with this one guy, I'm totally in love with ... and it got all messed up ... and I'd feel bad destroying the poem, because it's like a baby... (how many stupid excuses can I come up with)
Well, I liked it, and it seems that you've won this challenge ... maybe we'll try this again some time ... it's been fun.

Write on!


Your poetry buddy,
Sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-07-24 12:27 PM


""doesn't blood
have to move
to stay blue?
or maybe i'm different
maybe my blood
will forever be red..................

""yet i am stuck here
and someday
i will bleed my red blood
and i will die
but things will stay the same
in this place
that's in denial
covered in dust
and afraid of change""

that's what I'm talking about... those parts.


"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-24-2002 12:28 AM).]

shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
3 posted 2002-07-24 11:46 AM


if you read all the other poetry i never submitted here sara, you will see that i talk about dust A LOT too. dust is just so interesting i mean i've always wondered what it's made up of and why it's everywhere and how god created it and oh great i'm rambling again...

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
4 posted 2002-07-24 04:08 PM


This piece reminded me of a line from Fydor Dostoevsky's NOTES FROM UNDERGROUND: "Golden pins are stuck into people's breasts out of boredom. But what's worse? The pins will be welcomed then."

Good piece. It brings up an all too familiar rememberance of the boredom this life can have.

I love your signature by the way.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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5 posted 2002-07-24 04:12 PM


Hey Abby,  I downloaded that "She Hates Me" song, and it's soo good!!!
I didn't know your e-mail... so i thought i'd reply to your poem again! Lol
Great poem.. heehee.

Well, talk to you later.

Your Writing budd,

Sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
6 posted 2002-07-24 08:41 PM


i told you it was good! i think we keep missing each other on aim cuz i was on earlier then you were on and i wasn't now i'm on and your not...lol

oh and bye the way,  thanks secrets..i made up the signature my self ::grins:: i like yours too! i have never heard the poem you talked about but it sounds cool. yeah this life can be pretty boring lol

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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