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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-23 11:50 PM



I feel like I'm losing something.
I don't think it's you, (I've given up)
but a part of me.
Some say I've lost creativity...
But I don't think it's that.

I'm battling with insanity.
I'm not winning, (but I won't give up)
but not losing, either.
Some say I should let it conquer me...
But I don't think it's right.


When you hate yourself for who you aren't,
and others hate you for who you are,
Which do you change for?

When you say you're fine,
and others say your crazy...
Which do you believe?


I think I know these answers
But if I am insane...
would it be safe to say so?

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

© Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-05-17 12:29 PM


As our friend Mikey would say, "I like the strength within the doubt that you show here"

I'm bumping this because I think it drifted away while "Dark" was in a "down" phase. More people should have a chance to read this...
Glad I did...yes, it's been awhile

Ed...

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
2 posted 2003-05-18 12:59 PM


hey
long time
smile

so I hear you like my replies?


nice seeing this again Sara
and I still say....
you are something special
dont ever stop writing, you

take care
B

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

3 posted 2003-05-28 08:59 PM


hey,  
this was really good!
so you thought you could get away from my replies huh?? j/j
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

aran
Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 34

4 posted 2003-05-28 10:06 PM


I really like this piece;

The structure makes everything flow fantastically.

Mind if i use this as the lyrics for a song?

GGF
New Member
since 2002-08-08
Posts 2
Tennesee USA
5 posted 2003-06-02 08:20 PM


hey sara,guess who?! its me bailee lol
i told u ur ****  was good!
i liked it anyways

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