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iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2002-07-23 11:46 AM

Kurruption of Society

You knew damn well this day would come,
But you never knew how much damage it had done,
You never seen the future not even the past
The secrets will unroll and unroll real fast

Death and distortion will fill the proportions,
That once was good and now is evil,
Once strong minded you now are feeble,
They have korrupted everything you saw.

Law - was taken to another level,
Above many other levels,
Once steady but are you ready?
For the Korruption of Society is here.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-23 10:01 PM

iMMuNe,

Sorry it took so long for me to come across this... I wish I would have seen it sooner.
This is really, really impressive.
You must be very experienced...
If you don't mind, I'd like to add this to my private library on PIP.

Love it!

keep writing
-Sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-23 10:03 PM

... i just keep reading this!!!

It gets better everytime.

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

3 posted 2002-07-24 04:24 PM

Thanks and of course you can.

You may think im in the twenties or the late teens. But kind of think about it, im only 14. I seen alot of stuff at my age.
Gimme a url to your pip site, id like to check it out!

-iMMuNe-

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-07-25 06:41 PM

Are you a Kittie fan?
Because I realized how your typed 'iMMuNe'
(it reminded me of *iMMoRTaL*)
Anyway ... if you click the little house button, it'll take you to my home page on AOL.  I'm not positive what you mean by 'pip site'... I'm not positive I have one.  lol
(I'm stupid)
I didn't think you were too old... I'm 13.  Some reason I can usually tell age through poetry ... sometimes. Lol.  I had a feeling you were a young teen though.  Anyway ... still a great poem... I love reading it over and over again ... why haven't you been posting?
I'm missing your poetry?  What forum do you post in?

-Sara

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NineInchNails

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

5 posted 2002-07-27 11:34 PM

Sorry,
I have been away on vacation for awhile. Im finaly back and ready to post. Im not an average poet, I have other stuff to do and all but when I have time I will write. Do you have AOL Instant Messenger? Id love to stay in touch with you. No im no fan of anyone, iMMuNe is just a name I have thought of for awhile now. hehe.

-iMMuNe-

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