Dark Poetry #3 |
Going Nuts! |
Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
I am desperately infatuated "In love", I claim? My breath is all but gone You have taken me captive in your SEDUCTIVE web Nothing left for me to do but let you suck the life out of me I see your plan is different than mine at least, I think so?? Where from here? I feel only doom Only a dark forboding gloom So I sit in fear With a burning tear crying for *YOU* Chase away my stormy blue That is what I live for now To "love" only YOU And YOU love only ME But that will NEVER be A TRUE REALITY! Please do what you will do But, do "IT" quickly For God's sake Do "IT", before I self destruct Leave my dignity behind And beg out of my mind! In a state of Going nuts! [This message has been edited by Scarlet Lady (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I know this one...only a time or two...and then you give in or give up... Good poem! Made me remember what IT feels like. Thanx!! Click |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well written. I felt the craziness within the poem. Sorry you're going through this...... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
I loved this it was very real and soooooo true..i hate it when feelings aren't mutual..good luck! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Thanks all for the kind words! And craziness is an understatement of how I felt while writing this one! ARGHHHHHHHH!!!! I hate it when that happens! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Loved the title! ( I feel NUTS today!!) LOL The poem was great too. I also have been there and felt that. It passes in time, well it did for me! Good luck to you, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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