Dark Poetry #3 |
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Fear of Forgetting |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas ![]() |
I remember growing up With you always by my side I remember the horrible accident And the saddened day you died I remember the laughs You gave to me each day The smiles in your thoughts In each word you would say I remember my dream You entered one night Holding my daughter close While following the light I remember you like yesturday And all the memories that flow It tore my life apart When it was time for you to go You gave me so much In the short time you were here I remember you like yesturday Yet I am scared, I do have a fear Will there be a time That you will fade away? Will I lose you in my thoughts? Lose track of you one day? Just a few thoughts about a special person that died 13 years ago. No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
I think when we loose someone close.. they become a part of us. Sometimes buried down deep but always there. I had someone close to me die 8 years ago. I think of him most everyday... i keep him alive in my memory. Hugs Carman |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A good treatment of this problem, Dark. Be glad for the memories, we don't all have good ones to remember. But it all fades and if it didn't we might not be able to go on. Create some memories for your family that will echo your own. |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
I love how you concluded this. Super job! *thanx* ![]() ![]() mYsTiC |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
I dare say you have answered your own question touching tribute |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Beautiful and sad. Concerning your fear of fading memory. Why should it happen, if it hasn't done so over all those years? Also- maybe you'd wish, that the memory could be less intense, so your life would be more under your control. My experience is, that if precious memory fades, that it has done its 'job' and you are released into a new dimension, which is not negligence but rather cutting the cord with appreciation for what you have learnt. Thanks, Bee. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Memories never fade! This was beautiful*S* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
How well I know this feeling - and I've dealt with many memories....it's hard when they are still fresh enough to hurt, but later they will become small warm pebbles that you can hold and enjoy. (I have warm ones that are more than 50 years old - trust me!) You don't ever lose the memories you want to keep. This poem is a beauty - I love it! Lary |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Thanx ya'll ![]() ![]() Love you guys and gals, lol Mags |
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