Dark Poetry #3 |
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Shattered Colours (Blood and Rainbows challenge) |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now ![]() |
I drank of your blood and tasted your rainbows; the salt-rust colours of all we have done. I cradled your storm and learned how not to run away. Falling through mirrors, prisms and reflections, gasping for air, not knowing how far to go. Never wanting to stop. This burning red on my lips; make me blind. The abusive colours beckoning, beckoning, reflecting back and shattering. A bloody mirror kiss; yours and mine, sweetly silver in the slivers of refracting light. I could drown here forever. I could die here, with your touch. Hold me close, soft in vibrant colours, breath of promise closing my eyes. I feel your tears, too warm, and am overwhelmed by the sense of red. Orange. Yellow. Green. Blue. Indigo. Violet. Violent, in its anguished peace. In shattered colours, you are with me.
written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*shiver-whimper* She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Lori~ You grow in this as well, (no longer dark for dark sake) or maybe you too have taken a giant step forward. Impressed, ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
oh the images you given me... "I cradled your storm and learned how not to run away. Falling through mirrors, prisms and reflections, gasping for air, not knowing how far to go." that stood out and stuck.... i like this like looking in a cracked mirror, reading through it... it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (07-22-2002 03:51 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So you are the spoiled girl that has the Cure on vinyl huh? hmfp...no fair... ![]() (she says as she shakes her worthless CD and gives it a mean look) grins... enjoyed your bursting rainbow Lori girl... been wondering if the rainbow looks so damn tranquil when you turn it inside out? sorry...but you get some of this..like it or not!!! ![]() Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This is why y' need to turn it up! WHAT?!?!?! WHO SAID THAT?!?! Someone Deaf Listenin' to Bad CD Mixes She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (07-22-2002 06:48 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Deliciously dark... well done! ![]() ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Vinyls are a good thing, and they inspire good things. ![]() ![]() ![]() And it's only one of my ... six Cure on vinyl. ![]() Anyway, thank you, thank you! I think "deliciously dark" is now going to become part of my vocabulary, Tiersdin. And Mikhail, need I repeat that you are way too easily floored? written in blood before everything went black |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
wow lori this is...well, here lemme show ya "The abusive colours beckoning beckoning reflecting back and shattering" mmmmmm! (green brian envy brian) ditto wranx you have grown in short time made the old man whimpershiver! I like coming on here and seeing you two goofymeshed lovegears holdin down the fort lori please keep em' comin' BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
*shakes head* Please believe I haven't 'grown as a poet' in two months. *rolls eyes* Nuh uh. My style is all over the board. It changes every time I put pen to paper. I've written poems of the style and calibre of this years ago, months ago, whatever. Whatever pops out pops out. I'm less inhibited when absolutely dead tired, of course. ![]() Oh, and I guarantee that I've made Mike whimpershiver/shiverwhimper/anything combining these two actions before. ![]() ![]() written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-22-2002 11:44 PM).] |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Aw, isn't she cute? She's fighting your praise, and yet proving why its there, too. ![]() She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Grr, bad word! There's a reason why cute is four letters. ![]() Grr. written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Other four letter words: Love. Lori. Snow. Sigh. Heat. Cold. Wind. Mind. Are any of those bad words? Mike (another one!) She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Keep up yr errant positivity, and Mike may full well become one of those infamous four-letter-words. *sweet smile* written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Errant positivity must become a poem! She said burn ... together. |
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