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A Fake
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A Fake |
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jge84 Junior Member
since 2002-06-27
Posts 10IL USA |
I'm in too much pain, In too much sadness. What can I do To stop the madness? This is all Too much to take. It all just seems To be a fake. I didn't think It could happen to me. But I guess my life Is not hurt-free. If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I like your poem. Short, but to the point. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hey. I love this. Don't feel alone though... I doubt anyone's life is hurt free. Cheer up, but keep writing. -Sara "And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd like to control you/Cuz I can't control myself." -GreyDaze |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
wonderful poem. it was straight to the point yet not boring at all. the subject was awesome (i hardly ever say that word) one that everyone can relate to. being humans, nobody can be hurt-free because we constantly hurt each other every second of every day of our lives just with little things. i loved your poem. i'd like to read more of your writing, haven't seen you around... life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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