miseverything (my hesitant return)

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miseverything (my hesitant return)

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-07-21 10:47 PM

Nothing works on the inside
Nothing works at all
And it seems as if you biding time
Till you give up and just fall
No one works on the outside
They love you then forget
Cause when things get to hard for them
Thier caring turns to (what do you think)
Your whole life people failed you
It all just seems too much
Turned cold by others weakness
Your heart reduced to mush

(much and mush, im loosing my edge, wait, what edge)

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-07-21 11:13 PM

Welcome back,

Actually, I think this is quite good (mind your spelling though)

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose

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