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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-07-21 06:47 PM



If
as separate entities
you & I could be
WE
Imagine...

Passion's fire burning
over oceans
unquenchable thirsts
ever drinking,
endlessly seeking
breath...

If
as two individuals
our spirits made the connection
& understood the true essence
of love's power
our desire will discover
forever...


~Tier
7/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-07-21 06:53 PM


You know what this means, right?

We need to write again (and again and again and again). Amazin' poetry here, Tier. <--unlike that

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
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2 posted 2002-07-21 07:13 PM


A wonderful little contemplation here, Tier
Beautiful!


Or...is this a proposal? Cause, if it is, You hafta know that I have an issue.(or several)


~wranx


I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

[This message has been edited by wranx (07-21-2002 07:13 PM).]

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-07-21 07:24 PM


Thanks, Mikey... I really love the last two poems that you have written! But my fav has to be the one you did for Lori...  breath-taking.. I tell you!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2002-07-21 07:26 PM


Wranx, trust me, If I proposed, you'd have to forget about your issues and start worrying about mine...

Thanks for the nice comment!

*chuckles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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5 posted 2002-07-23 06:52 PM


this. . . is what I've been talking about Tier. . . you say it so well. . .

enjoy seeing you again my friend. . . it's been too long. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

wranx
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6 posted 2003-07-18 11:44 AM


It's been WAY to long....Where are ya?
Tiersdin
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7 posted 2003-07-18 07:30 PM


Dear Wranx,
thanks for shaking the dust off of this old write and giving it a little light.  I do miss those days with you, mikey, Anvril, Devina,ect...

Didn't we have FUN?

*smiles*
~Tier

wranx
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8 posted 2003-07-18 11:25 PM


Didn't we though? I guess you could tell I was missing it...You, them.

*grins*
~wranx

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-07-19 01:03 PM


Those unpenatrable ties that bind, undeniable were really brought out so well in this write. Lovely trip to that cerebral part of our existence between ourself, and another.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-07-20 03:06 PM


breathtaking . . .

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