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Dark Poetry #3
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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128
0 posted 2002-07-21 02:06 PM


once upon a time
i was happy
in a world where
love was
dominant

then the world
came crashing
down around
my feet.

you told me i
would have
my happy ending

...but it hasn't come yet.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

"Speak of me as I am...one that loved not wisely but too well."
(shakespeare;othello)
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-21 02:20 PM

~Venus~
This is very impressive.
I loved Shakespeare until I had to do a report on him...
Anyway,
Your poem is wonderful, short, but still full.  The wording is beautiful.
Keep sharing your talent.  

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.....    and pierce.

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