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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
please, please explain to me how these words can be reality is this the world i thought i knew? is this the one through which i flew? are these the buildings i saw before now twisted and burning people falling show me no more is this the land i grew up in and laughed and cried and buried my sin? is this my world where i was born where i was fed every night and morn? i don't want an answer just take me away i can't bear the burned memories of my childhood days this earth is not worthy of the people bestowed or is it the people no love to land have showed? please tell me no answers but tell me more lies i don't want to remember the days of my life it's a very strange poem. strange indeed but i am just writing it about my old neighborhood which i went through today. the first verse was inspired partly by the comment i wrote on someone else's poem but i'll shut up now and let you write whatever you want for a comment. bye! life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
You don't need to make yourself shut up, SD. Sometimes, when you're trying to make a point, you have to keep talking. (or writing) well, anyway. (I say anyway, too much.) This also was a very good poem.. I hate, also, how things change, and want to be fed a mouthful of lies. Ah, that reminds me of this one Kitty song... "your mouth will be of led and lies." or something like that... Any 'who'... Wonderful poem, once again. Continue sharing your talent with us here at PiP. -Sara If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
I love this....wonderful poem!!! DeaDiAmore |
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