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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
the whispered words you'll never hear the twisted smiles you'll never see maybe it's a good thing i silently think though inside i know it's not the world was never meant to see your eyes you're too wonderful you're too delicate and maybe it's a good thing i silently think i hope i'm right i truly hope i'm right and maybe you weren't meant to be born the way you are maybe you were meant to fly and maybe your soul really does though your eyes are still and your ears are deaf your soul isn't blind maybe you really do fly your heart still beats though you seem so dead you really are alive and maybe i misjudged you my muse my angel my heart my soul i really do miss you while you're sleeping and i really can see why you do sleep the world is cruel not meant for your pretty eyes and i still remember when your soul was still alive and i'll treasure the moments until you wake up my breath my wings my life my paradise my love life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
"maybe it's a good thing i silently think though inside i know it's not" I loved this so much. I can truly relate to this. Oh my gosh... I'm so amazed, I'm practically wordless... Are you sure you're as old as you say... You seem so much more mature. It seems you've come across so much... But I guess we all do. I hope to read more poems like this... This is my favorite of yours so far.  -Sara ***KEEP WRITING, ALWAYS*** If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
enjoyed this I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice...loved it. DeaDiAmore |
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