Speaks Again {inspired by Sven}

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alibaster
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since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2002-07-19 05:30 PM

The Darkness speaks again...
who will hear?
The Darkness walks year after endless year...
who will shiver?
The Darkness touches the Sweets faces
with chrome figertips...
who will feed her empty spaces?
The Darkness awakens once again...
who will hold her ghostly hand?
The Darkness whispers gut wrenching screams...
who will listen to her dreams?
The Darkness hungers yet again...
who will feed her thier tormented pain?
The Darkness speaks again...

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-19 08:24 PM

Wonderful poem, and very good quotes, also.

The Darkness... it really makes me think.

Keep writing...

(i'd write more, but I'm thinking...

)

-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-07-20 01:27 AM

ahh..I hear, and I am quite sure that Sven will hear.

Lovely writing from The Gentle Darkness.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

3 posted 2002-07-20 02:05 AM

grea poem..darkness loves only the ones she sees...my little verse, lol not as good as yours also:...the darkness keeps secrets that death only knows...i'm just in a poetry writing mood!

well anyways i'm going to go write my own poetry now so see ya later!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-07-20 12:34 PM

I love it...very nice.

DeaDiAmore

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

5 posted 2002-07-20 09:26 PM

I can relate to this so well.

"The Darkness touches the Sweets faces
with chrome figertips...
who will feed her empty spaces?"

Beautiful...

Yours truly
~Broken~

Such griefs with such men well agree,
But wherefore, wherefore fall on me ?
To be beloved is all I need,
And whom I love, I love indeed.

S.T.C

[This message has been edited by Broken (07-20-2002 09:27 PM).]

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

6 posted 2002-07-21 11:24 AM

Thank you all for your kindness, it is greatly appriciated.

Sven...I must thank you for the first line of this and the insperation to go on with it...ahhh the things you find in replies...*smiles wickedly*
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-07-22 04:53 PM

ali. . . you're welcome. . . yes, replies can be great sources. . .

I'm listening again. . .

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