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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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here, take back this sword I've used it long enough the battles have been long and hard and though I never killed I did hurt but, I was driven (if driven is a word) by myself my other self full of anger not what I was meant to be but, what I became now, the time has come to release this to let go to strike the sword into the stone never to be released again ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So...uh...John??? bringin your sword in here fer some dark play huh??? (evil me...yes...but you tempt)  now that I've pounced for missin ya... this? OH YES!!! you know JUST how to word it sweets... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
definetely time to get rid of that sword, Sweet Man.  Lets hope there isn't anyone who can pull it back out either. Good to see you in dark, but you once told me something like this.. Visit the dark once in a while, but don't let it take you completely.  Hope that was close. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
um, Tanya?? me tempt??  hardly my dear. . . but, I feel I need to be here for a while. . . so, you don't mind do you??? I didn't think so. . . Temptress, yes. . . it is time to get rid of it. . . it's pretty heavy to carry. . . and yes, time for me to visit the Darkness again. . . for a moment. . . thanks. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Intriguing piece. I like the reference to the Sword in the Stone, clever analogy. Kudos. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sven, This would be the place for a little excorcism. Hope you don't mind the rest of us watching. ______________________________ Oh! how's your Joycian thingamajig comin'? Don't hurt your head too much with it. Have fun! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
second thought..maybe you should get that sword back out? Or..can I? I can think of a little hunting I'm hungry for these days.  Still like this. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Secret Whisper, thank you. . . just a way for me to finally put it away for good. . . wranx, no, I don't mind you watching at all. . .but, it might get a little ugly. . .and the Joyce-inspired thing is coming. . . too bad it doesn't flow like his river did. . . Temptress, no, I think that it should stay where it is. . . better to keep it than to let it loose again. . . thanks for the words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
how did i miss this beautiful work? yes, take back this sword, and yes, although i never killed, i hurt... (assuming fetal position, and sucking thumb) great poem! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I dont know Sven sounds like a camlot story to me, watch no comes along to realease it Still a interesting wrtie  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Eve Gnosis. . . yes, I know the feeling. . . I too, have hurt. . . which is why I'm giving it back. . . thanks. . . Moon Dust. . .not as Camelot as I'd like it to be I'm afraid. . . thanks. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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