Dark Poetry #3 |
Forever in our Eyes |
Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
One night of Mistaken passion Now forever in our eyes The both of us, are taken Buried beyond our lies This uncontrolable passion Heats us up inside Wanting so badly to be with Each other, Knowing that this Can Never happen What is it that we feel? We know it isn't love Our Hearts belong to someone else Is this just Lust? We confess so much to each other In our Daily talks Knowing that this is wrong But we continue to feel for each Other Today, You held me close And that's when i just cried, Telling You how much i Miss him, leaving Stains of tears on your arms Confusing? Yes, to both of us We can't explain what we feel But we both know that somethings There, what is it? can someone Explain This sinful feeling i have *This is something a friend of mine is going through* can i help her? No, because i can't understand it myself* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- [This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm not good at this but let me give it a shot. Maybe they both really don't love each other, but at the same time still see the things they long for and miss from their true/other realtionship from each other. Having some similarities may drive you closer to each other, but that doesn't mean that you're both in love. Well, I'll shut my mouth now for I might not be making any sense I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
I think that you hit a strong point in this one..one that i couldn't come up with...Thinking that she is in Lust with him..because of her lover's absence so she needs to lean on him for security...Thanks for your reply*S* Temptressmoon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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