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FadeN2you
Junior Member

since 2002-07-15

Posts 15

0 posted 2002-07-16 09:35 PM

Tear drops are only half real,
at least that's what I tell myself.
And maybe this life isn't worth it-
but I'd like to at least attempt to try.

Because this feeling is only half lived,
and I'd like to feel it more.
But life lets the bottom fall out,
and I can't live with things like that.

These teardrops are mounting quickly,
blended with memories of you.
And I'm thinking of calling you,
just to hear the sound of your voice.

Maybe I'd say that it was the wrong number,
ask for someone without your name.
Or maybe I'd just hang up quickly-
not wanting to cause this all again.

And I hope that maybe you could see me,
in the back of your simple mind.
Calling you over a payphone,
just to remember the way you smelled.

But these tear drops are only half real,
and I'm waisting them on you.
Life is too unfair,
but then again- it's you.

--FadeN2you June 3, 2002

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2002-07-16 09:41 PM

I couldn't have said it as well. Very good write, and I relate to this one, as I am so guilty of the need to call just to hear, even if I say no words and hang up.
Right on the nose with this one.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2002-07-16 09:46 PM

I liked this one. Well expressed and full of thought!

Dark

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-07-16 10:28 PM

Awww sweetie- I love the purging of your soul!!

and so poetically I might say!!!

take care you!!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

GoddessofHell
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

4 posted 2002-07-16 10:30 PM

But these tear drops are only half real,
and I'm waisting them on you.
Life is too unfair,
but then again- it's you

Beautiful.....

Enjoyed much!

Heather

FadeN2you
Junior Member

since 2002-07-15

Posts 15

5 posted 2002-07-16 11:30 PM

Hey-- I just wanted to say thank you to all of those people who have read my poems, and told me how wonderful they think they are, truthfully, I put my heart into all of my writings and a friend of mine just told me about this site (LadyPeach1) Thank you. You all have great writings also, I'll try to post some more up, and work on that spelling