Dark Poetry #3 |
catharsis |
brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
dusty eyes unwatched flies more life inside than when alive clinging shirt a sticky mess better way for you to dress quieter now mouth is sewn enjoying this: the buzzing drone a nice day summer heat puddled around your swollen feet love the way you did the walls pollock never had the balls purple hand outstretched in greeting? i'll ignore it, thanks and find some seating I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
wow, I found my self laughing a little after reading it. Not sure of meaning, I sense death, and a little disgust.... Thumbs UP! Thanks |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Great poem! Enjoyed very much. Heather |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
catharsis? oohh- wicked you tonight!!! grins... I should try my hand at the mouth sewing technique...I find it quite appealing at times...rofl love the mood you set this one up with!!! take care you! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
So that's why there's a fly in my room. She said burn ... together. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks drift- you got it Heather- thank you devina- awww shucks .... thanks (i find 20# test line wurks reel good) squirrel- I can loan ya a swatter? thanks for reading I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I always hated that artificial crab meat...lol (pollock) This, my friend, was wickedly clever. I shall have this one endure in my mind. Excellent job! |
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