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Dark Poetry #3

You say... (Empty assumptions)

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-12 10:39 PM

My nails, black.
My clothes, black.
My personality, black.
My hair, blonde.
You say there's something wrong with me.

Someone must have taken my identity.
Look at you.

Your shirt, pastel pink.
You shoes, high.
Your hobies, shopping.
Your sex, male.
I'd say there's something wrong with you...

"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

1 posted 2002-07-12 10:42 PM

Wow, your really posting a boat load tonight...

You know, I used to wear all black
but then I started balding

Nice post,

Thanks

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-12 10:47 PM

only 3ish...

Thanks for replying 'a boatload tonight'.
Badling... that would upset me... >

Thanks!!

"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

3 posted 2002-07-12 11:43 PM

do you really wear that much black? lol i loved this poem. reminds me of someone i know. hey, exchanging of insults always makes a interesting poem. i love writing poetry like that!

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-07-13 08:17 PM

That rocked!

(a black wearer)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

5 posted 2002-07-18 02:04 PM

ShadowChild, I do wear a lot of black, not that I'm Goth, or there's anything wrong with being Goth, but I'm not exactly.
Bqurriel, You know YOU rock!!

Thanks everyone.
-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2004-01-01 04:12 PM

It was sort of funny in a way to me. Maybe I'm just retarded.
*Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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