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Dark Poetry #3

Richness Of Soul

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2002-07-12 02:19 AM

Bitter tears and broken hearts,
To one who does not deserve.
Pain and sorrow prevails,
As the victim grows dark.
The richness of soul deserts...
Being put through Hell leaves marks.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-12 11:54 AM

Two of my friends are going through something like this. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-07-12 12:56 PM

scarred but hopefully
wiser
and deeper for the experience
nice poem
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

GoddessofHell
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

3 posted 2002-07-12 01:58 PM

Being put through Hell leaves marks.

I like this....very nice.

Heather

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

4 posted 2002-07-13 05:57 AM

Short but Sweet! I love it Jess!
LP1

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-07-13 08:40 PM

Yes, it does. I love how th' title works with this poem, too. Great job...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

6 posted 2002-07-13 10:12 PM

Gotta agree with Mike. And be envious of how you can make a short poem work... My ideas ramble on endlessly.

Someone teach me how to keep it short!!

"Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

7 posted 2002-07-16 08:16 PM

Thanks for all of your replies.

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