Dark Poetry #3 |
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Midnight Beauty (sneaking in after the lights're out, I know) |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now ![]() |
Okay, so Mike wins... For ONE poem. And if no one reads it and my point gets proven right, then Mike doesn't win n'more. Grr.
"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, let's make it simple: READ THIS OR ANVRILL WILL GO AWAY FROM PIP FOREVER. ![]() I love this poem, babygrrl. Well, that's kinda a given since ah had y' read it to me over th' phone. ![]() Mikhail She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You know Lori...let me start with my honest opinion of your work here... I have found you to be a metallic gaze in this oilslick of normal round here most the time...course if you start with the patho lovey stuff (mush-mush) and stick with it...I might just do you in!! grin... Seriously girl...you are on of a kind round here and we NEED you to stay (definantly NOT saying this for Mikey's benifit...even though he is pro'ly smilin now) Think about it...we are a bit addicting...no??? (my feelings at stake here too!) *guilt drip* Loved this poem too btw...now that I've given you my say... I'm off to shek on my babe... ![]() Hope to see ya laters girlie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lori...dont feel dejected ... the number of replies is not a measurement a poets talent... it takes a while to get a "fan base" built up in here...this place is huge now...you have to give people time to find you..and? you have to get your name out there so they will look for you... the only way to do that is to read and reply...and also the Dark forum moves slower than open. Some have more time to spend here than others and with so many forums and poems... there wont ever be enough time to read all that we want to. Dont be so hard on yourself...you are a poetess...look at the impressive imagery and detail of theme in this post...and the things you and Mike inspire in each other is awesome. Look at it this way...youre here anyway...in every beautiful word he writes ![]() Now for me some words come easy |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
"her tongue moving in your mouth spelling out more promises" reverie......... oh, uh, yeah. No. How about ONE more poem. and then maybe a few dozen more give or take a hundred or so.... BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I don't mind not many people readin', I mind no one readin'. Like my favorite, now lying buried in the depths of Dark somewhere... *pout* Of course, I had to've seen it coming; post the poem I like best, and watch as only Mikhail reads it, for the fifty millionth time since I wrote it. ![]() Eh, I'll put up new poems, if I write. It's a random occurence, where I can get six in one day or in one year. Okay, so never that few, but still. Thanks all. I'm currently in too much of a haze to be properly smiley or anything, and I hafta work again t'night. Augh, I needed two nights off after a six-night stint... Darn job. "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
1st. This is a great piece (the poem, I mean), It is Anvrills' best post in my ("count for nought") opinion. But that's the point. This one, is MY favorite, Anvrills' own favorite may not have been my cup of tea. 2nd. Anvrill will stay or Anvrill will go. Anvrills' choice. Personally, I enjoy her work and appreciate the effort that this endeavor takes. 3rd. Lori, Please stay. These people are STILL scary and bummed out That about does it! ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really like the way this was written, Anvril, well done! I enjoy visualizing as I read. Post more, more, more! and do stay!!!! ~Tier ![]() "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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