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Dark Poetry #3

Thoughts of you

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-01 11:52 PM

Waking in the morning,
Pillows scattered on the floor
Thoughts of you still lingering
From the dreams the night before
Missing you completly
Wishing you were here, to awake
With me in the morning
To kiss away my tears
Soon the time will come,
When all my dreams turn true
Until that day arises
I will awake with thoughts of you

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2001-02-01 11:58 PM

Simply beautiful!!!

DkW

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-02 11:43 PM

this is one of the sweetest poems i've read all day. It's simply but it doesn't lack in feelings and emotional content

thanks for the beautiful read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2001-12-11 02:14 AM

ahh..yes..until the day you can awake with him.

I love this!

I am many.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-12-12 11:36 AM

Awe, This is great!!

ELMO

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2001-12-15 04:43 AM

I liked this... a nice "soft" poem

Take care.

~ Tara ~

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